We were asked to visit each studio space in pairs and write down about 5 negative things about the person's work.
At first I was thinkig 'what ever happened to positive thinking??', But I turned out that we all got alot of constructive criticisim that we could build on!
I was left with a damn long list, which I'm surprisingly happy with. I was sick of being told 'Thats really cool' or 'I like that'.
This gives me something to work on.
- Confusing contextual notebook
- Need more 3D work
- BIGGER work
- Elaborate on contextual resarch
- Branch out my ideas
- Use a variety of colour
- Experiment!!
- Look at different aspects of the wave
- TOO MUCH BLUE!
- Too literal
- Too repetative
- Unnecessarily filling space
- Work is too 'Heavy'
- Change materials
-Amy x
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